Looks good to me.
As I've said, my primary goal is to make sure there's as little confusion as possible about the official portions of the Rockbox project. I'd say that covers it pretty well.
Just as a small note, the CVS Builds and Daily Builds are two different things. CVS builds occur every time a change is made from the source, while the Daily Build is just a copy of whatever the last CVS build was right before a certain time each day. Statistically speaking, the Daily is just as likely to contain major bugs as the Bleeding Edge / CVS build is. And in fact, sometimes it has, the bug has been shortly after, but people have spent 24 hours complaining that the Daily has a major issue simply because they didn't know that the Bleedin Edge build is always available, and that it had the fix in it.
I'm not sure if it's necessary to clear up the different between the two in the above post, but it's something for you to think about mentioning at least.